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Before I had meet you
I never realized your impact
           
I though finding you would be best.

But, all I found was that I had no idea
About what was gone wrong
                                         
But I started to be treated differently.

I learned there was more
As if it was necessary
                                           
That I changed the way I looked at my life

I learned that you
Care a lot, but it was only for
                                           
Looking at anything that gave you the upper hand.

A new way of living that
I never had seen before
                                           
But, It hurt people so quickly.

I never realized the pain,
The impacts it has on society,
Or the people around me.
But I know now.

I am trapped
                                           
And I realize

I can't get away
From what is now me
   
And I will never be able to escape,

From true self.
Changing

I just wrote this up after looking at my old poems. I'm taking a class now that literally analyzes poems the whole time and I'm trying to apply some of my new knowledge into this poem.
I hope that you like this poem, if you do, please comment!

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I was writing this really cool story that I've been working on for months and I had a outline that I was writing my work off of... but my parents accidentally saved a document over the outline. I'm so mad right now, I still had seven chapters that I had outlined really well and now I've lost it all. I can't believe it. I really wish that there was a way to recover it, but I didn't have the backup file thing on and my parents had closed the document meaning I couldn't undo anything.

Just thought I would let it out, already screamed at my parents. They didn't seem very sorry. So whatever. I now have to write a whole new outline and seven brand new chapters, which I can't remember what I wrote about. I hope I can come up with something interesting. It was a complicated story and I don't know...

I felt really proud of myself for actually writing an outline and everything, but now I feel lost. I was struggling with the chapter that I'm already writing at the moment, but at least I had the majority of the story done... ugh...

I just want to cry....

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SynchroniseSky Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
thanks for watching me ^^
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All-Fall-Apart Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
No problem. I really like your art! :D
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AkaAyakashi Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
Thanks for the watch!!:squee:
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All-Fall-Apart Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
Your welcome! I really liked your work. :D
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confusedxphreak Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Thanks for the fave and watch! :]
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Nerux3 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
thanks for the favorite :iconcutiesmileplz:
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sorado Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Thx for the watch! ^q^
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x-Xiulan-x Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the watch ^^ :hug:
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ForeverMenou Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you for the watch!

May I ask why?
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All-Fall-Apart Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
I loved your poems. They, not trying to be cliche, touched my heart. I felt that I could relate to them. I can't wait to see what you come out with next. :D
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